For the background to my writing challenge, please read my first blog by clicking the following link – http://wp.me/p1x6Ui-4. If you would prefer to dive straight into note 74, then please read on…
Recap on notes 72 and 73
Yesterday I blogged about the words like and as (see note 73) and how like is used with phrases and as is used with clauses. You can also refer to note 72 which describes the difference between a phrase (contains no verb) and a clause (contains a verb).
‘Like’ and ‘such as’
Today’s blog is about the difference between using like and such as in your writing. The Little Red Writing Book by Brandon Royal, says that “such as is used for listing items in a series.”
E.g. He went to the zoo to show his young son animals such as the lion, the monkey and the elephant.
On researching this further and to give you more examples, I have discovered a site which explains the difference really well. Suite 101 (website link below) explains that you can use like and such as interchangeably, but your writing will have more impact if you are seen to know the difference. A quote from the site is as follows:
“Remember that the difference between like and such as is subtle. If you are at a loss of which to use, think whether you are writing about the actual object, place or person or just comparing the object, place or person to similar things”
Follow the link to read more at Suite101: ://www.suite101.com/content/understanding-the-difference-between-like-and-such-as-a308086#ixzz1S1PENglc
Some examples are:
- In a new job Ed was looking for things such as better salary, shorter commute and more flexible working hours
- In a new job Ed would be looking for things like better salary and more flexible working hours
Point 1 lists and compares similar things that Ed may look for in a new job, whereas point 2 contains a more specific list.
I was going to begin with a very short blog about how to use ‘such as’ in your writing, but ended up learning more than I set out to learn today. Hope you have enjoyed reading this. I blog daily so please don’t forget to come back tomorrow to learn more or subscribe to receive the blogs by email.
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Brandon Royal (2004) The Little Red Writing Book, USA