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Punctuation, Time

Note 35 – ‘The time’ in writing


For the background to my writing challenge, please read my first blog by clicking the following link – http://wp.me/p1x6Ui-4.  If you would prefer to dive straight into note 35, then please read on…

How to write the time

Graham King in The Collins Improve your Punctuation, suggests using the 12-hour clock in writing, rather than the 24-hour clock (unless required for technical reasons).  If, however, you choose to write the time out in words it would be five-past eight in the morning or half-past eleven at night.

There doesn’t appear to be a fixed rule for writing the time in the 12-hour clock format.  Which do you prefer from the four ways listed below?  

(a) 8:05 am  or 11.30 pm 

(b) 8:05 p.m. or 11:30 p.m.

(c) 8.05 pm  or 11.05 pm

(d) 8.05 p.m or 8.05 p.m.

Graham King recommends using a single dot between the hours and minutes and no dots between the am or pm, as in c above, whereas William Strunk and EB White in The Elements of Style suggest writing the time a little more formal as in b above.

My thoughts: I believe that consistency is key here; pick a style and stick to it.  Personally, I’m going to go for 1c.

The exception: 12 o’clock

Graham King doesn’t recommended putting am or pm after 12.00, when writing in the 12 hour clock format.  He suggests the following in all cases:

  • 12.00 midday
  • 12.00 midnight

Hope you’ve had an enjoyable day – I’ve loved every minute of it.  If you read yesterday’s blog you will know that I went to The Kensington Roof Gardens last night.  It was an enjoyable experience –  the party was great, the gardens were smart and there was free-flowing champagne all night.  Not being a lover of champagne, I thankfully didn’t have a sore head this morning, hence having an enjoyable day today!

Until tomorrow…

Sandra

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Twitter: @madeirasandra  and  @tipsandluxuries 

Reference list

Graham King The Collins Improve your Punctuation, UK

William Strunk Jr. and E.B. White  The Elements of Style, fiftieth anniversary edition (2009), USA

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About Sandra Madeira

I am a working mum and entrepreneur with a passion for writing, coaching, mentoring and inspiring others. Subjects I tend to blog about are life skills, parenting, decluttering, worklife balance, career etc. I’ve been on a decluttering mission for years creating space in my house, garden and mind. In 2020 I challenged myself to declutter every day for a whole year and write about it daily. After that success I took on a challenge to change my career from accountant to life coach, and in early 2024 set up my own company. I continue to keep up with the decluttering, and now write daily about my home life and coaching business. Have a good day! Sandra https://www.sandra@solarcoaching.co.uk https://www.linkedin.com/in/sandramadeirasmith

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